Monday, 30 April 2018
P1 - Tabloid Vs Broadsheet on the Same News Story
Comparison of the Same Story in Two Different News Articles
The Telegraph
In the Telegraph when
talking about ‘Brexit’ the writer often makes it seem like the Brexit
negotiations are making the UK look weak. For example they describe Britain as
being left as the European Union’s “Lackey” suggesting that the UK is being
dragged around by Brussels and Germany and being made a fool of.
Another Example is that they
ask for Jacob Reese-Moggs’ opinion as he has been appointed as the newly
elected chair of the influential European Research Group of Eurosceptic Tory
MPs. Jacob Reese-Mogg suggests that the UK would become a “vassal state” of the
EU.
Overall the Telegraph has a
negative view of the Brexit Negotiations that are occurring and want to get out
of the EU as quickly as possible, this is a more right wing view as most
brexiteers want stricter border control and less continental opinions.
This shows that there is
bias towards certain politics and political stances in the newspapers/print
media which can be interpreted. The telegraph is a conservative paper so its
views come across as conservative. Even on Wikipedia the paper is described as
a conservative paper. Sometimes being referred to as the ‘Torygraph’ showing
that people know that the paper is more right leaning.
The Mirror
On the
other hand the Mirror approaches with a more optimistic outlook on the Brexit
negotiations suggesting that the longer negotiations are a better way of
getting out of the EU. The article says that “The influential figures tonight
said they believe the UK is heading for a Norway-style relationship with
Brussels during a transition period of around two years immediately after March
2019.” This view is a more optimistic view than being called a “Lackey” this comparison
towards Norway is a positive for the extended length negotiations as Norway,
although not being in the EU have access to trade deals and easy access to the
other EU nations.
Belgian MEP
Philippe Lamberts told The Independent: "During the transition period, the
UK will be a member in all but name, but it will no longer sit at the two
tables where decisions are made; parliament and council. This sugar coats the
fact that the UK is not in control of what decisions will be made about our
Brexit and the deals that we get with Brussels and the rest of the EU after we
leave.
The Mirror
goes for a more liberal and Pro-Brexit negotiations taking a longer time as
that is a more liberal view, which is what the paper describes itself as.
In
conclusion it is apparent that different papers have a political opinion and
that their articles reflect these opinions within the articles identifiable by
the word choice and the language used. E.g. the Mirror tend to make the
problems with staying in the EU lesser than leaving and vice versa for the
telegraph complaining that the faster we get out the better we will do.
P1 - Mirror Group vs News Corp
Mirror Group vs News Corp
Mirror Group
The Mirror Group or Trinity Mirror, is a UK based
conglomerate that has multiple news subsidiaries. It is the largest UK based newspaper,
magazine and digital publisher; around 240 papers across all the UK, this
includes Broadsheets and Tabloid, as well as other magazines and online News
sites. Their headquarters are located at Canary Wharf in London. Some of the main Subsidiaries are:
- · The Mirror
- · Sunday Mirror
- · Daily Record
- · Sunday Mail
- · Western Mail
- · The People
News Corp
News Corp is another Conglomerate owned by Rupert Murdoch,
owner of the Murdoch Family. They are based in the UK and have many subsidiaries
such as:
- · The Sun
- · The Times
- · The Sunday Times
They are also an International news company as they also own
some large US news sites and papers, including The Wall Street Journal.
Pros and Cons of having different methods of news Deliverance
Pros
- · A larger audience can be reached
- · It can be easier for different people to access different types of news
- · News can be targeted at different audiences
Cons
- · The news stories can contain bias when written by people with an opinion
- · Parent companies can choose what the subsidiaries can publish
- · The news can b repetitive in subsidiaries
Sunday, 29 April 2018
P2 - Citizen Journalism and Comparison to Regular News Articles
Citizen Journalism
Global Voices Article
What it is:
Global Voices is a website that has been created to allow
people to write their own journalism pieces if they think it is needed or they
want to make them. In the about us page they say they are “a border-less,
largely volunteer community of more than 1400 writers, analysts, online media
experts, and translators” their trusted
team of editors which are in over 167 different countries report on news that
they think is relevant in their country/continent.
Some advantages to Citizen Journalism sites is that you can
get a largely unbiased website as you can have people from all over the world,
who may or may not have a political opinion.
Another advantage is that you can create a large non-profit
company as the people working and creating articles are not necessarily being
paid to create the journalistic articles
Whilst some people say these Citizen Journalism Websites are
unbiased other think otherwise and say that the person who writes the article
has some bias towards how they convey the article. This can be similar to some
larger regular news companies who can have a political opinion
For example, in the article on the Global Voices website
‘Crimes of Solidarity Once again lead to Outcry in France’ this article is
talking about how migrants have to cross over the Alps from Italy into France
and how the public is outraged about the conditions that they are in, tweeting
about Emmanuel Macron and his choices, plus the new policies he has set.
‘Crimes of Solidarity’ Once again lead to Outcry in France - Global Voices Article
The page details some of the problems in France as well as
some of the publics opinions for example some people tweeted:
“In @EmmanuelMacron‘s world, it seems that:minors are abandoned in the mountains at the Col de l'Échelle
minors are locked up in detention centers
migrants are tear gassed and deprived of water
tents are slashed
volunteers are taken to court for crimes of solidarity Link: pic.twitter.com/THlUZ68v2G”
This article
seems quite left leaning due to the fact they mainly include statistics about
the problems when the migrants are coming into France, and what can happen to
them, where as an unbiased article would state the positives of the migrant’s
information and it would also include some problems with the immigration.
Similarly, in
papers like the Guardian, which is considered a very Liberal left leaning
newspaper also has the same approach to documenting the travels and experiences
of the migrants and how many problems they face. As the Guardian is not
Conservative at all they also have the same approach as the article above.
Another thing
about the article is that it has many Tweets and other opinions about the
subject, I believe this is to make it so that there are many other opinions
available so that people
On Paris’ Icy
Streets, Migrants Wait for Word on Refuge – The Guardian
This article seems to villainize the French Government a lot
more than the Global Voices one. Often saying things like
“I respect France, but France does not respect me,” he said.
The Title uses the adjective “Icy” to create more drama and
make the user feel bad and sorry for all that Migrants that enter the country illegally.
This is to try and guilt the French people into feeling
sorry for the Refugees who are coming into the EU and France. This Pathos plays
on the hearts of the French people as they will believe that they need to do
more for the migrants entering the country.
The Article has many 1st person accounts from
different people coming into the country as Refugees, people from all over the
world such as Sudan, Kenya, Syria and Iraq. They document their stories trying
to get to France and then talk about their conditions back home. Which is
another way to make the French people feel guilty.
This Article is written by a Liberal person who believes
that all people dissevered the same equal opportunities. As a more Conservative
article could possibly talk about some of the problems with Mass immigration with
no Integration, for examples Cities in places like Sweden or Germany which have
a larger Foreign population that actual Germans.
Comparison
Some interesting
things between both of the articles are that even though the Global Voices article
is supposed to be an article without bias, due to being citizen journalism, it
seems to me that anyone who writes the article will have a bias regardless of
their choices when writing, as the subject they write about will automatically
have bias, for example in the article that I have chosen to analyse it is about
the “Crimes of Solidarity” even the title has bias in it as the injustice
delivered to the migrants in Paris are “Crimes” some people would view this as
left leaning, when citizen journalism is supposed to be unbiased.
Most news articles are usually written in a regular format, instead of as a Global Voices article are written by citizen journalism. I believe this is because people will find the information that they want to find. This is referred to as a bubble. People who agree with one type of paper will place themselves inside a bubble with views similar to that of themselves, where as to correctly tell both sides of the story you have to weigh up both sides. Bias occurs when the journalist writing the article does not consider the other sides views or disagrees with their opinions. This is apparent in papers such as the Guardian or the Daily Mail, who both have different political / moral ideas.
Comparison
Some interesting
things between both of the articles are that even though the Global Voices article
is supposed to be an article without bias, due to being citizen journalism, it
seems to me that anyone who writes the article will have a bias regardless of
their choices when writing, as the subject they write about will automatically
have bias, for example in the article that I have chosen to analyse it is about
the “Crimes of Solidarity” even the title has bias in it as the injustice
delivered to the migrants in Paris are “Crimes” some people would view this as
left leaning, when citizen journalism is supposed to be unbiased.
Similarly, the Guardian is the most left leaning newspaper that
is available in the UK with some people even referring to people who read it as
“Guardianistas” it is apparent that the article that they have written is a
left leaning article as the language used is very emotive which could be seen
as a way to pander to the migrants and those that agree with their entry into
the country.
In comparison both articles are similar on topic however the
Guardian article tries way harder to show how hard done to the migrants are, whereas
the Global Voices article does not pander as much to the left, and involves more
facts and statistics.
Most news articles are usually written in a regular format, instead of as a Global Voices article are written by citizen journalism. I believe this is because people will find the information that they want to find. This is referred to as a bubble. People who agree with one type of paper will place themselves inside a bubble with views similar to that of themselves, where as to correctly tell both sides of the story you have to weigh up both sides. Bias occurs when the journalist writing the article does not consider the other sides views or disagrees with their opinions. This is apparent in papers such as the Guardian or the Daily Mail, who both have different political / moral ideas.
P2 - Online News Trends
P2 - Trends in News
Popularity
Some popular news sources in the UK are:
·
BBC News
·
Guardian
·
Daily Mail Online
·
The Telegraph
These are some of the largest news sources in the UK that
offer an online news service. All of these sources are reasonably trustworthy.
Trends
Some trends involving how news is consumed are
1. The
gap between television and online news consumption is narrowing – This suggests
that 50% of the population gets their news from the television, and rising is
43% of people who have got their news off an online news source. This increase
is readership via the online digital format shows that more and more people are
moving onto the internet as a way to seek out information, instead of relying
on the television is slowly becoming less used, as people become busier and
impatient.
2. Another
interesting trend in information is that news that is posted on social media
only 5% of the population actually trust the news that they read on social
media. This is a low number suggesting that there is a large distrust between
social media, sharing and receiving news on this type of platform. This is
probably as a result of all the fake news that people keep suggesting is being
created, as well as Russian Bots that create fake news stories. Overall most
people distrust news that is provided on social media.
3. A
trend that is very apparent is the amount of older people who have started to
use social media and obtain information online. 85% of all older people who
have access to the internet receive some sort of news from the internet. This
shows that more and more old people are likely to visit news sites online.
Online
Most newspapers have started to move online as a result in
the drop off in people purchasing newspapers.
Some Companies that fully operate online and thrive there
instead of choosing to print papers are:
Independent
The Independent newspaper have fully moved to a digital
format, as they believed it would be a better business decision than to
continue to print papers that do not sell as well. Instead making money off
advertising on the site and app. “Its monthly audience has grown 33.3% in the
last 12 months to nearly 70 million global unique users. The site is profitable
and is expected to see revenue growth of 50% this year”.
Buzzfeed
Buzzfeed are a social media company operating out of California
who create online news on social media. Business insider explains that Buzzfeed
works by having an algorithm that monitors other websites that have news
articles, videos and images. The algorithm then decides how much traction that
each source is getting, adding it to a list of articles that might want to be
created based off of the traction of other news sites. Then a writer at
Buzzfeed investigates the source and then if they believe that the article will
bring in large amounts of traffic, they will write an article that will feature
on the Buzzfeed website, or their other forms of social media, such as Snapchat
where they are regularly allowed to have articles on the Discover tab.
Overall Buzzfeed gets its money off of things going viral;
and then diverting the traffic to their website and making the money off of
advertising and CPM.
Independent:
PewResearch:
Business Insider
P2 - Providers of News
Providers of news from BaileyWilkinson1
Sources:
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Saturday, 28 April 2018
Friday, 27 April 2018
P3 - Newspaper Structure
Newspaper Structure
Colloquial:
Colloquial text is where the text is written in the dialect
of who is speaking, for example, if someone in Scotland gave a description of
how someone looked for a crime report, it could be written colloquially as to
show exactly how they person described the criminal. Informal.
Expletive:
Can also be just inappropriate language such as swearing or
sexual comments? Most papers censor the swearing, however papers like the
guardian allow swearing when writing about the article.
1st Person Speak:
First Person speech can be used in things like interviews
and some tabloid articles where a specific person is writing about an event.
This is usually used in self Journalism and Columns. Guest Editors like comment
pieces.
3rd Person Speak:
Third person speak is used when someone is describing what
has happened, this covers the Why part of the Article. No internal opinions,
other than those of people who are in the article/commenting.
Bias Due to Structure:
Different papers will show different parts of a story and
will structure their articles based upon how they want to present the article.
For example in the Guardian, during the London Riots, which were started by a
black teenager that was killed by a police officer. On the other hand the Daily
Mail would show how the riots are doing/what has happened during them and then
state why?
P3 - Who, What, Where, When, Why
W.W.W.W.H in News Articles
Who
What
Serial Killer obsessed Jemma Lilly, and her housemate Trudi
Lennon have gotten 28 Years in Jail for murdering a teenager in their Home.
They garrotted, stabbed and buried Aaron Pajich at their home.
Both women exchanged
homicidal fantasies which gradually intensified until they lured Mr Pajich to
his death.
In the weeks before the murder they bought 100l of
hydrochloric acid as well as circular saws and other various supplies.
They lured Mr. Pajich into their home where Trudi then cheese
wired his throat whilst he was installing games onto her computer, Jemma then
continued to stab him in the chest three times.
Mr Pajich was then buried in a shallow grave, where he was
then covered with tiles.
It was discovered that they had committed the crime when a
euphoric and confident Jemma told someone of her “triumph” at work
Where
At Jemma’s Home in Perth, Australia
When
13th June 2016 she murdered the teenager, and on
the 28th of February 2018 she has been prosecuted.
Why?
Jemma Lilly was born in Stamford, Lincolnshire. Jurors where told that Lilly had a troubled
childhood. She had emigrated to Australia in 2010 and developed what
prosecutors have described as a long term fascination with serial killers.
Lilly had idolised the serial killer Freddy Kruger, and she
had told a friend that she had wanted to murder someone before her 25th
birthday.
The two women Lilly and Trudi met through a friend than
quickly became close friends, moving in together 2 months before they committed
the murder.
Lilley's stepmother Nina said she had "always had an
obsession with serial killers" but this had been "a way of venting
her frustration of what happened when she was a child".
P3 + M2 - Describe the Structure and Purpose of Different News Articles
Hard News And Soft News
North Korea at the Winter Olympics: All you need to Know (Soft News)
Headline Analysis
The News article’s headline is a god way to get people to
want to know more about the article, as people like to stay informed.
Language Used in Article?
Expletive language is used in this article, it is very informative
and gives many sides to the story, such as the political and the sporting parts
of the two teams coming together.
1st or 3rd Person Used?
3rd person language is used, as North Korea and
South Korea are referred to in the third person.
Influences (Audience, Format, Genre, Expectation)
The audience is probably most types of people as the article
is not too political, but is also interesting enough with context, so I would
say the article is for people who are +10. It could be for any grade boundary
either ABC1 or CDE2 bands.
The format is several paragraphs of information with some
pictures throughout. It is an article of information about the Winter Olympic
Games in Seoul. The Genre is sport, as it is linked to Winter Sports. And the
Expectation of the article is to be informed about the North and South Korea
joining together for the Winter Olympics.
An expectation of this article is to see some facts and
things you might not know about the North and South of Korea coming together
for the Winter Olympics.
Images or Videos
The Article has several images of the stadiums and athletes
of the north and south. As well as the video that South Korea used to help advertise the Olympics.
Why did Kylie Jenner name her baby Stormi? The Hidden meaning behind the
unusual Moniker explained (Soft News)
Headline Analysis
The headline is a
question, which is used to spark the reader’s interest, as they will ask
themselves the question why did she name her child Stormi, They then suggest
that there is a Hidden meaning behind the babies Mysterious name. Overall this
Headline is used to generate clicks onto the news article as people want to
find out what the hidden meaning is.
Language Used in Article?
Some Colloquial language is used, as the main demographic
for this news article is CDE2 category of readership which usually needs a more
informal and colloquial approach as that is what the readers can be interested
in, as it needs to keep their attention. There are also some comments about
their announcement of the name.
1st or 3rd Person Used?
3rd person is used with some 1st
person speak from Kylie Jenner, as she has to give the reporter a reason as to
why she has named her child Stormi. There are also some comments about their
announcement.
Influences (Audience, Format, Genre, Expectation)
The audience would mainly be women aged 13-30 as the Jenner
and Kardashian families are mainly viewed by females. The format is a tabloid
information article, and the Genre is Entertainment and Gossip. The Expectation
for this article is to find out why Kylie has named her child Stomi and why she
gave her child such a strange name.
Images or Videos
There are several images of the Kylie Jenner and the baby,
as well as a video of Piers Morgan of Good Morning Britain where he “Slams
Kylie Jenner “for calling her baby Stormi, which is a different opinion of how the article is
written suggesting that the writer has put that in to interest people who may
not agree with the name.
Bank of England hints at earlier and larger rate rises (Hard News)
Headline Analysis
When people view
this article, they know that it is going to be boring and hard news so people
looking at this article are probably interested in the finance of the UK or it
is their job too. The main demographic for this article will be people in the
ABC1 Band as they have higher incomes and are more likely to care about economics.
It will also be an older generation of people who mainly view the article
around 25+ will look at this article. Language Used in Article?
The language is mostly informative and Expletive language
that is used to inform the reader
1st or 3rd Person Used?
It is mainly 3rd person as the banks are the
focus of the article. However, there are some interviews and quotes from people
inside the article as they give their opinions on the Earlier and Larger rate
rises in the UK.
Influences (Audience, Format, Genre, Expectation)
The audience will be a bit older than usual around 20-60
years I would assume being the main demographic. As they are people who mainly
have jobs as unemployed people in the CDE2 band will probably not be too
interested in the Economics of the country. Also, the readers will most likely
be more educated that people who view soft news.
Images or Videos
There are images of the main bank chains in the UK like TSB and
Lloyds. As well as a video that goes into some depth about the topic featuring
interviews from some important people in the banks.
US lead Coalition Strikes Pro-Regime forces in Syria (Hard News)
Headline Analysis
The headline seems
very militaristic and informative, as well as could be pro US as they generally
dislike the Syrian Regime of Bashur Al-Assad.
Language Used in Article?
The language used in the article is only in Expletive 3rd
person as it is talking about the US army air strikes.
1st or 3rd Person Used?
3rd person is used most of the time, in the video
there is some interviews but that is not part of the text so I wouldn’t include
it.
Influences (Audience, Format, Genre, Expectation)
The audience would be around 17-60 again as most people want
to be informed. The format is mainly paragraphs of info. With the genre being
political.
Images or Videos
The first thing is that there is a video directly at the top
of the page, this is similar to most CNN videos due to the fact that they have
to appeal to an American Audience who generally do not like to spend too much
time reading the facts.
Soft News Links
BBC North and South Korea:
Mirror’s Kylie Jenner’s Baby
Stormi:
Hard News Links:
BBC Bank News:
CNN USA Syria Air Strikes:
Thursday, 26 April 2018
P4 - News Values in Articles
News Values
J. Galtung and M. Ruge said that there are 12 Factors that
influence the news, these are known as News Values
The Twelve Values are:
1. Frequency – Long term event reported on regularly – Brexit in which the UK plans on leaving the European Union, as the UK believes that it would be better off outside the EU
2. Size and Scale – The bigger the event the more likely it is to be reported on – Trump and Kim Jong-Un.
3. Predictability – Is it an event that was expected to happen or anticipated – A far right demonstration and the ensuing riots that often come with them from groups like Antifa.
4. Closeness to home / Proximity – If it has relevance to Britain, local to the UK – UK terrorist attack on London Bridge vs a Mudslide in India
5. Demand – It is an event that we want to happen – The Royal Wedding which is a national event that people want to know about.
6. Unexpectedness – events that happen without warning. – Pet Detectives to use Drones to track down lost dogs.
7. Rarity – Something not predicted – The Japanese Tsunami on the 11th March 2011
8. Continuity – an ongoing story that has high news value – The Murder/Kidnapping/ Mystery of Maddie McCann who went missing in Portugal, Princess Dianna Death and the circumstance around it, Transfer Saga when football is on and a play might be transferred.
9. Elite Nations – Stories that involve powerful nations (political or financial) Trump and his planned Mexico Border Wall
10. Elite People – People in the Public Eye – Celebrity News – Celebrities going shopping e.c.t.
11. Ordinary people, Human interest story – Story about an ordinary person that might represent an issue or someone that provokes sympathy/approval/disapproval – Homeless man helps Manchester Bombing Victims (Actually robbing them)
12. Negativity – Bad News Sells – Murder of Rhys Jones, Acid Attacks on the rise in London, Car Crash Statistics.
News Values in news articles
Frequency – Elon musk and his company SpaceX are quiteoften wrote about in the news as people are interested and
intrigued by the activities within the SpaceX company. Many
news sources love to talk about the latest coming from within.
Size and Scale – SpaceX is quite a large company within the US
that is at the forefront of technology, recently launching a
rocket into space and making it land again. Talking about how
both companies Tesla and SpaceX are only around by “the
skin of their teeth” is quite amazing.
Predictability – I believe this article was unexpected as many
people believe that Elon Musk's companies are incredible money
makers, Tesla is seen as one of the most innovation
companies in the US so jot many people would know this
would happen.
Proximity – This story is in the US although most large stories
in the US also make news in the UK due to the western nature
of the article.
Demand – This article is not something that anyone wanted, but sometimes some articles need to be reported on.
Unexpectedness – I believe the article from Elon was unexpected although the interview was
organised the speech within is not other than the questions that would of been determined before
the interview.
Rarity – I do not think this article is rare as it is something that could of easily happened to any company even large ones for example Blockbuster and Toys ‘r Us.
Continuity – This article does not continue on from any other major stories related to the SpaceX or Tesla companies it is the start of a new timeline.
Elite Nations – This article is about a large company in the US that is quite important in the US as it is quite a large and advanced company inside the US
Elite People – This article is definitely about an elite person. Elon Musk is quite an influential figure
who is trying to help advance society by creating trips to Mars and providing eco-friendly cars that run on electricity. He also has a huge Twitter following as he often replies to most questions.
Ordinary People – Elon Musk is definitely not an ordinary person as he is constantly in the piblic eye. As well as he is extremely intelligent and famous.
Negativity – I wouldn’t say this is a negative article ... I would however say that it is unfortunate as he has done os much for technology and to learn that his companies aren’t doing well is quite
unfortunate to hear.
M2 - Analyse the Different Linguistic Conventions in Different Articles
Analysing Linguistic Conventions used in Different
The presentation of a story or piece of news that is intended
to generate a reaction, either Emotional or Logical. May not be Accurate, but
helps storytelling, or pushing a certain view/idea.
Examples
“Snake
on a Plane – Jon Bennet’s Killer lands in US jail”
Reference to the Film, but also would create a rhetorical
question for the viewer as they want to know why there is a snake on a plane.
The headline is not exactly relevant to the story, it forfeits accuracy.
“Killer” is placed in Apostrophes suggesting that he hasn’t actually killed him
or he is allegedly a killer.
“Terror
as plane hits ash cloud – Dramatic pictures as a jet gets OK to defy volcano”
“Terror” is used as the first word, not just fear, it is
“Terror” is a sensationalist word for people being scared. The word “Hit” also
makes it dramatic as it didn’t hit a cloud it went through it, makes it seem to have more impact.
“1,200
killed by mental patients – Shock ten 10-year Toll exposes care crisis”
Number is a fact, although it is large on the page adds to
it. “Exposes” suggests some kind of criminal association or injustice. “Mental
Patients” make you think of insane and clinically insane people committing
murder. “Care Crisis” suggests an end world scenario and makes it seem more
important.
P4 - Anonymous Questionnaires
Do you Think Deyes High is
Overcrowded? Circle Answer
Yes
No
Do you Think Deyes High is
Overcrowded? Circle Answer
Yes
No
Do you Think Deyes High is
Overcrowded? Circle Answer
Yes
No
Do you Think Deyes High is
Overcrowded? Circle Answer
Yes
No
Do you Think Deyes High is
Overcrowded? Circle Answer
Yes
No
P4 + M3 - My Article Topic and Primary and Secondary Sources + Extra Secondary Sources
My Article Topic
Is Deyes High Overcrowded
Students Suggest that Deyes is too full and that the situation is only
getting worse.
My article will be about if the school is becoming too
overcrowded and weather it is a problem for student’s educations in the lower
years of the school.
I will be able to discuss
the number of students in comparison to the other schools in the UK and
Maghull, I will also be able to discuss the amount of students that come into
the school recently and how the size of the school’s years are becoming larger,
putting a stress on the amount of teachers.
Perhaps talk about some students concerns with how big their
class is or if they feel like it’s fine.
Primary Sources
Here are some of the Primary sources that I could possibly
use in my Article. Primary Sources are sources that I have collected by myself,
these for example can include a questionnaire or some small interviews.
Questionnaires
A Primary Source that I could use would be to survey some
children in each year to find out if they think they receive enough time with a
teacher, and if they have classes that they believe are too large. I think
interviewing the younger years would also be a good indicator as to which year
has the largest class sizes.
A good year to interview would be the Year 13’s as it is the
smallest year in numbers, and also being the top of the school making sure that
the classes are not too big as they have the largest amount of work to do.
Interviews
A good person for me to interview would be Mr. Ellis, as he
is in charge of creating all the time tables for the schools lower and higher
years, I could ask him about
• Difficulties trying to create the time tables that the
school uses, 25 lessons a week, needing a certain amount of math, English and
science as well as with the amount of teachers that are needed.
• As him if there has been an increase in class size since
2011, as the main point in the article will be that the school is taking on
more and more children each year in year 7.
• Another question I could ask Mr. Ellis would his thoughts
on how the amount of teachers per student has decreased, and the repercussions
of larger classes.
Perhaps I could talk to someone like Mr Delaney who is the
head of Sixth Form, he would be a good person to answer as he knows how many
students have come and gone through the sixth form and he could talk about the
increase in size for the sixth form years, since 2011-2018. Another question I
could ask him would be to ask him about the negative repercussions of having a
large year, and what stresses it causes with things like allocating teachers
and lessons.
Another good Reason to interview Mr Delaney would be to get
his opinion, as he is quite an important member of the College @ Deyes, making
sure to get important people’s opinions would be a good idea to show the
credibility of the Article.
I could also possible conduct some smaller interviews with
students to get a more detailed opinion on the subject at hand, such as if they
believe the school is overcrowded, and what the school does to make sure that
they have a good education.
Secondary Sources
Some secondary sources I could use would be some recent
studies into the growth of the younger generation Z and the increase in large
numbers of children being born in the north west. These children being born
will need somewhere to learn and be educated so the massive amounts of children
will obviously cause strain on an already strained system.
To the side the Secondary Sources that I have found could be
used to show the state of UK schools and then I would apply it to Deyes High
BBC Article About the Size of Schools in the North
“According to the latest school census, in 2016 there were
17,780 state secondary school children in 2016 being taught in classes with 36
or more pupils. This is the highest number for a decade. In comparison, in 2011
the number was 6,107” This is a good Statistic as it backs up the point that
the size of classes is growing in the UK and that there is a problem with
classes of over 36 children in the UK, which is unacceptable.
It also says that about 90% of children who attend state
schools in England are taught in classes with 30 pupils or fewer. However,
teachers' unions warn growing pupil numbers and shrinking budgets are placing
strains on the system. This shows that there have been inquiries into the
problems with overcrowding in UK schools, launched by the Teachers Union
Telegraph Article About Overcrowding
Around £15 billion is needed over the next four years to
guarantee every child a place in a safe school environment, according to
research published by the Local Government Association (LGA) and the
Association of Directors of Children’s Services last month. This Article shows
more statistics and the cost of making sure that all UK children can get into a
Primary or Secondary School
NUT Article
The Teachers Org is a good place for me to look for
information because it is main written in the UK so that means that I won’t
have trouble finding relevant statistics if I want to use any in my article. It
also gives some other opinions from people who work in and around schools, it
is a good place also for more statics about the amount of schools available and
how much room they have.
PDF File About Mental Health
This PDF clearly States that there is a link between
“Overcrowding in Schools, that could have a Limited Effect on students in the
Classroom” This could tell us that the amount of students in a classroom can
affect how much education a student receives as the large number of students
lowers the amount of one on one time with a teacher or someone that is teaching
them.
GOV.UK Article
In 2017 the overall number of pupils in secondary school
increased for the second year, reaching 2,797,000. This is primarily because
increased births from 2002 onwards means there are now larger numbers entering
secondary schools at age 11 than are leaving them at age 16. The rate of
increase is projected to increase in 2018 to 2.4% and to remain high until
towards the end of the projection period.
https://www.gov.uk/government/uploads/system/uploads/attachment_data/file/627388/SFR31_2017_Projections_Text.pdf
Extra Secondary Sources
https://www.telegraph.co.uk/education/educationnews/8086642/100000-pupils-crammed-into-overcrowded-state-schools.html
- This is an Article by the telegraph that shows some more statistics about the
amount of students coming into primary and secondary schools in the UK over the
next few years and it details their reasons and some problems that I could
write about.
https://warwick.ac.uk/fac/soc/al/research/groups/llta/resources/telc/strategies/
- Here is an article talking about the some of the problems with the larger
class sizes that could be seen in Deyes High in the future, as well as some of
the problems for the students and the teachers in the class in relation to the
work that they have to do as well as things like the marking of work and the
distribution of the school’ supplies. As well as some of the ways teachers can
relive the stress of a larger class.
https://files.eric.ed.gov/fulltext/ED532900.pdf
- This is an article about how some countries have tried to
combat the effect of overcrowding in school classes such as limiting the amount
of students in lower years to a maximum of 30 students per class and also some
other ways different countries have fixed the issues.
https://democracy.buckscc.gov.uk/Published/C00000133/M00002674/AI00003381/$Classsizepaper.docA.ps.pdf
– Here is another PDF that can be viewed to find out some
more problems with the large class sizes that could be coming to the UK due to
the recent baby booms and the larger birth-rates, due to things like immigration
and a better standard of living after the recession as thing are improving.
Moral Panic
One of the main problems that I could cause would be
resentment of the lower years of the school, if I accidentally suggested that
the schools lower years were too large and that they were somehow ruining the
school for the higher years it could cause friction between the years. To avoid
doing this is must make sure that only include statistics that I have found or
created myself, and I will try not to insinuate anything that could be take
negatively
Hyperbole
I could create moral panic using Hyperbole to describe how
crowded school is, perhaps I could use adjectives that exaggerate the truth,
adjectives like Crowded, Crammed, Stuffed and other adjectives to simulate
claustrophobic feelings would be a good way to make the reader feel as if there
is a larger problem with the amount of students in comparison to the amount of
teachers that are available.
Emotive Language
Using emotive language would probably entail me suggesting
that the school’s staff are at ‘breaking point’ and that there is ‘no more
room’ this type of language would make it so that the reader feels apologetic
and grief in the fact that the poor teachers can’t provide enough education to
the students of Deyes High.
Another way I could spin the article would be to use emotive
language that could be read by the children’s parents. ‘Deyes High sorry for the
lack of spaces available for new year 7’s’ this article could spell outrage as
it would possible strike a nerve with some parents who are trying to place
their child her in year 7 and have possibly been rejected.
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