Wednesday, 25 April 2018

P5 - News Article Draft #1


P5 - News Article

Is Deyes High Overcrowded?

In 2017 the overall number of students enrolled in secondary school increased for the second year, reaching 2,797,000. Schools in the UK have seen a large increase in the amount of students being enrolled in secondary education places. According to the school census in 2016 there were 17,780 state secondary school children in 2016 being taught in classes with 36 or more pupils, this has been the largest amount of students in this position ever recorded. In comparison to the 2011 census the number was only 6,107 which has almost tripled. Students being taught in classes of 36 students or more is a large problem for many reasons, such as the cost to train and hire teachers, cost for new facilities and equipment as well as the stress on teachers and

In Deyes high there are currently 1,444 students enrolled in the secondary part of the school. On January 2012 there were 3,268 state-funded mainstream secondary schools in England, of which 1,226 had between 1,001 and 1,500 pupils meaning that Deyes High is slightly above the average of students, (which we can assume that these numbers have risen since the study was taken). A recent interview with Mr Ellis who is responsible for creating Deyes High’s timetables, he was asked about how the school is coping with the large amounts of students in the North West and the Whole of the UK. He said that “generally the year groups have around about 235 students” and that “currently year 7 have about 242” meaning that there are only an extra 7 students to what there would normally be as a couple of people appealed and “extra places were allocated” He suggested that Deyes is “oversubscribed” suggesting around “400 to 500 applicants” However some of the sixth form students believed that the school was overcrowded, in a survey of 20 people 17 believed that the school was overcrowded whilst only 3 said that it was fine.

When Mr Ellis was asked about the cost of maintain a large school he said that the “challenges would lie more in the practical lessons” stating that subjects such as “P.E, science and technology” are harder to maintain as there is a certain “health and safety aspect”. Health and safety has to be “appropriate”. Another problem that he talked about was that there are “only so many seats, only so many Bunsen burners, so many gas stations” Showing that there is only a certain amount of resources. One example that he gave was that “there might only be 30 computers in a room” and that you have to “make adjustments” one of the adjustments made this year was that the room “A22 has been converted onto a computer room, because we knew that that was something that was going to happen, so now that we can accommodate all those classes”

Another problem with having larger classes is that the teaching may suffer, many sources suggest that teachers are being overburdened. One teacher said that “I have too much homework to mark. It becomes almost impossible to give effective feedback for everyone." This certainly shows the strain that teachers have when marking and reviewing work. Teachers feel a responsibility for checking all of their students' work. However, there are many ways around having teachers mark all their students work, some of these ways are things like peer reviews which promote the class to think of the solution to the problem when done correctly. More things like this will be implemented more often as we see the growing number of students increase in the UK. One of the major problems when it comes to larger classes is that the teachers may not know who is learning what and what needs to be re-taught as interaction with each and every student may be impossible. When talking to Mr Ellis about the problems with large class sizes he said that “instead of having 30, 30, 30 in the top three sets and having 20 in the set 4 group you might have more like 27 in the set 4 group” and that there is “little difference between having 20 and 27 students in a group”

Overall the reason that College @ Deyes students believe that the lower years are larger is that primarily the class of 2016 and 17 were smaller year groups than normal so it seemed that there was a larger disparity, due to the lack of the baby boom until 2002 and onward. Creating a false illusion that the years were getting bigger.

Tuesday, 17 April 2018

M4 - Structure of My Article and Mode of Adress


M4 - Structure of My Article

For my article I have tried to structure it in a way that makes sense and that makes the article flow in a comprehensible manner. When creating my article, I created some sub headings that I would use to help plan out the article, these sub headings were as follows
·                    UK General
·                   Deyes Comparison
·                   Affected Learning
·                   Conclusion

Making these subheadings really helped out as I was able to categorise all the information, primary and secondary sources under one of these headings and pick out quotes or statistics that I could use to tell the article to the reader. I started off by looking at the UK as a whole as it allowed me to talk about the growing number of children being born in the UK and when the baby boom started, as well as the amounts of secondary schools in the UK and the average class sizes for all of the schools.

Next I talked about how Deyes High compares to the national average, suggesting that Deyes was an average sized school based upon some secondary research. This was so that the reader could align Deyes High with the national averages, so that I could show that the school is slightly oversubscribed. I used the interview that I had conducted with Mr Ellis to show that the school is oversubscribed as he told me in the interview. I had the opportunity to talk about some of the areas in which the school does well and some places where the problems arise.

Affected learning is when I compared what Mr Ellis said about the school and the children learning in a class larger than 30, to what secondary sources said about learning when in a class larger than 30.  This section is mainly for parents who will be able to see if the school believe there is a problem with the size of the classes, to generate their own opinion on the subject.

The Conclusion acts as a final statement where I get to explain my point of the article, as I had an opinion that I wanted to get across during the article, so having a closing statement in the conclusion is a good idea as it leaves the reader something to think about.

Mode of Address

I have made sure to use the correct mode of address to complete the article. I have only used 3rd person when writing, to make it seem as if it were a conversation between the writer and the audience. I have only used third person when writing the article, when there are quotes I have left them in the first person as it is what the person interviewed said.

I have made it so that the news article is in an overarching opinion of the question. As I am the gatekeeper for how the article is written and how the audience will receive the news, I have been able to give my opinion throughout with the choice of language that I have used.

I made the title a rhetorical question because I thought it would spark interest for the reader because it makes them question if they think Deyes is overcrowded. It also could be used to intrigue people into wanting to find out if it is overcrowded if they don’t have an opinion already. Overall this was a good thing to do as lots of news articles are either using a rhetorical question, alliteration a pun or they are just a regular statement. This mode of address is almost as if I were talking directly to the reader, creating a sense of conversation around the article.

I have mainly used Elaborative Code as i wanted the article to be accessible for all as well as the article being seen as informative, I have chosen to write it this way because I wanted my article to act as an in-depth analysis of why the school may or may not be overcrowded. I didn't want to put an emotive spin on it as I just wanted to get the facts across. If I applied this mentality to another article I believe that the style of writing most likely represents that of a Telegraph or Independant News Article as I believe them to be the most likely to focus more on facts than sensationalising or using restrictive code to get a story across.

Monday, 16 April 2018

D1 - Sources Justification

Sources Justification

Questionnaire Results
I have created an anonymous questionnaire that I will be using to base my article in reality, as my article is asking the question, “Is Deyes High Overcrowded” I think it is safe to say that I had to ask the students inside the high school if they believed that the high school was overcrowded. This was an important questionnaire as it allowed me to see how many people had an opinion on the topic. I asked roughly twenty people and there was seventeen that said that the school was overcrowded and only three people that thought otherwise. This shows me that my article has a reason to be made as I can investigate whether the school is actually overcrowded and that I am not creating a news article that does not have a reason to be created as I believe that some people would want to know if the school is overcrowded.
Another reason that the anonymous questionnaire is a good source is that I can view the results then assume that it would be generalised with the rest of the school, this would allow me to talk about a percentage of the students in the school without having to interview them all as I can say that the questionnaire was a focus group and reflect their opinions onto the news article.

Interview Results
The interview was definitely a success as I managed to find out some important information and things that I had no thought about when creating the questionnaire that I had asked such as some of the problems when it comes to creating a good time table such as the required learning hours for lessons like English and maths as well as some of the problems when managing lessons such as the IT rooms and also the Technology and Science rooms as they need a large amount of equipment on a smaller budget, this means that the school has a harder time making sure that everyone has the correct equipment for the correct lessons, such as Bunsen burners and goggles.
Another thing about the interview is that Mr Ellis pointed me in the direction of another teacher who handles the school lunches and the dining at lunchtimes in the lower years. I cannot believe how difficult it must be to estimate how much food must need to be cooked per year, and when the school years may bring in packed lunches the expense of making large batches of food and then having to either throw some away because too much was made or having not enough for all the students to eat.
Secondary Sources Justification

BBC Article About the Size of Schools in the North
“According to the latest school census, in 2016 there were 17,780 state secondary school children in 2016 being taught in classes with 36 or more pupils. This is the highest number for a decade. In comparison, in 2011 the number was 6,107” This is a good Statistic as it backs up the point that the size of classes is growing in the UK and that there is a problem with classes of over 36 children in the UK, which is unacceptable.
It also says that about 90% of children who attend state schools in England are taught in classes with 30 pupils or fewer. However, teachers' unions warn growing pupil numbers and shrinking budgets are placing strains on the system. This shows that there have been inquiries into the problems with overcrowding in UK schools, launched by the Teachers Union
This would be a good article to use as it would allow me to make sure that I am correct in saying that there is a larger increase in students coming to the north west and coming into secondary schools. It also has a large amount of statistics that could be used in the article to back up the supposed argument and counter what Mr Ellis had said as he believes the school is not overcrowded just yet.

http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/uk-england-38506305

Telegraph Article About Overcrowding
Around £15 billion is needed over the next four years to guarantee every child a place in a safe school environment, according to research published by the Local Government Association (LGA) and the Association of Directors of Children’s Services last month. This Article shows more statistics and the cost of making sure that all UK children can get into a Primary or Secondary School

https://www.telegraph.co.uk/education/educationnews/8086642/100000-pupils-crammed-into-overcrowded-state-schools.html

NUT Article
The Teachers Org is a good place for me to look for information because it is main written in the UK so that means that I won’t have trouble finding relevant statistics if I want to use any in my article. It also gives some other opinions from people who work in and around schools, it is a good place also for more statics about the amount of schools available and how much room they have.

https://www.teachers.org.uk/edufacts/school-places-crisis

PDF File About Mental Health
This PDF clearly States that there is a link between “Overcrowding in Schools, that could have a Limited Effect on students in the Classroom” This could tell us that the amount of students in a classroom can affect how much education a student receives as the large number of students lowers the amount of one on one time with a teacher or someone that is teaching them.

http://dera.ioe.ac.uk/5073/1/138631.pdf

GOV.UK Article
In 2017 the overall number of pupils in secondary school increased for the second year, reaching 2,797,000. This is primarily because increased births from 2002 onwards means there are now larger numbers entering secondary schools at age 11 than are leaving them at age 16. The rate of increase is projected to increase in 2018 to 2.4% and to remain high until towards the end of the projection period.

https://www.gov.uk/government/uploads/system/uploads/attachment_data/file/627388/SFR31_2017_Projections_Text.pdf

Extra Secondary Sources
https://www.telegraph.co.uk/education/educationnews/8086642/100000-pupils-crammed-into-overcrowded-state-schools.html - This is an Article by the telegraph that shows some more statistics about the amount of students coming into primary and secondary schools in the UK over the next few years and it details their reasons and some problems that I could write about.

https://warwick.ac.uk/fac/soc/al/research/groups/llta/resources/telc/strategies/ - Here is an article talking about the some of the problems with the larger class sizes that could be seen in Deyes High in the future, as well as some of the problems for the students and the teachers in the class in relation to the work that they have to do as well as things like the marking of work and the distribution of the school’ supplies. As well as some of the ways teachers can relive the stress of a larger class.

https://files.eric.ed.gov/fulltext/ED532900.pdf - This is an article about how some countries have tried to combat the effect of overcrowding in school classes such as limiting the amount of students in lower years to a maximum of 30 students per class and also some other ways different countries have fixed the issues.

https://democracy.buckscc.gov.uk/Published/C00000133/M00002674/AI00003381/$Classsizepaper.docA.ps.pdf – Here is another PDF that can be viewed to find out some more problems with the large class sizes that could be coming to the UK due to the recent baby booms and the larger birth-rates, due to things like immigration and a better standard of living after the recession as thing are improving.

Sunday, 15 April 2018

P5 - Differences between Draft #1 and Draft #2


P5 - News Article Draft #2


P5  - News Article      

Is Deyes High Overcrowded?

In 2017 the overall number of students enrolled in secondary school increased for the second year running, reaching 2,797,000. Schools in the UK have seen a large rise in the volume of students being enrolled in secondary education places. According to the school census in 2016 there were 17,780 state secondary school children being taught in classes with 36 or more pupils; this has been the largest amount of students in this position ever recorded. In comparison to the 2011 census the number was only 6,107 which has almost tripled. Students being taught in classes of 36 students or more is a large problem for many reasons, such as the cost to train and hire teachers, cost for new facilities and equipment as well as the stress on teachers and students.

In Deyes High there are currently 1,444 secondary school students on roll. In January 2012 there were 3,268 state-funded mainstream secondary schools in England, of which 37.5% had between 1,001 and 1,500 pupils. Deyes High falls slightly above average, (we can assume that these numbers have risen since the study was taken).

At recent interview with Mr Ellis who is responsible for creating Deyes High’s timetables, he was asked about how the school is coping with the rising number of students in the North West and the Whole of the UK. He said that “generally the year groups have around about 235 students” and that “currently year 7 have about 242”. This showed an increase of 7 students due to successful appeals “extra places were allocated” He confirmed that Deyes is “oversubscribed” attracting “400 to 500 applicants each school year”. However, some of the sixth form students believed that the school was overcrowded. In a survey of 20 people, 17 believed that the school was overcrowded, whilst only 3 said that it was fine.

When Mr Ellis was asked about the cost of maintaining a large school he said that the “challenges would lie more in the practical lessons”. Subjects such as “P.E, Science and Technology” are harder to maintain as there is a certain “health and safety aspect”. Health and safety has to be “appropriate”. “There’s so much going on you might have a circular saw, might have other things” Showing that the health and safety of the students has to be considered heavily in these subjects.
Another problem that he talked about was that there are “only so many seats, only so many Bunsen burners, so many gas stations” Showing that there is only a certain amount of resources. One example that he gave was that “there might only be 30 computers in a room” and that you have to “make adjustments” one of the adjustments made this year was that the room “A22 has been converted into a computer room, because we knew that that was something that was going to happen, so now that we can accommodate all those classes”

Another problem with having larger classes is that the teaching and learning may suffer, many sources suggest that teachers are being overburdened. One teacher said that “I have too much homework to mark. It becomes almost impossible to give effective feedback for everyone." This certainly shows the strain that teachers have when marking and reviewing work. Teachers feel a responsibility for checking all of their student’s work. However, there are many ways around having teachers mark all their students work, some of these ways are things like peer reviews which encourage the class to think of the solution to the problem independently and teach the students group work, whilst also freeing up time for the teacher to focus on helping students who are struggling. More strategies like this will be implemented more often as we see the growing number of students increase in the UK.

One of the major problems when it comes to larger classes is that the teachers find it difficult to keep on top of assessment and what topics need to be consolidated as interaction with each and every student may be impossible. When talking to Mr Ellis about the problems with large class sizes he said that “instead of having 30, 30, 30 in the top three sets and having 20 in the set 4 group you might have more like 27 in the set 4 group” and that there is “little difference between having 20 and 27 students in a group”. Some teachers may not agree with this opinion, as it could depend on the subject or the teacher. Subjects like Maths are generally quicker to mark and assess, whereas subjects such as English can be quite time consuming.

Overall the reason that College @ Deyes students believe that the lower years are larger is that primarily the class of 2016 and 17 were smaller year groups than normal so it seemed that there was a larger disparity, due to the lack of the baby boom until 2002 and onwards. The baby boom created a false illusion that the school years were getting bigger.

Monday, 2 April 2018

P6 - Sub-Edited Article and Analysis








I have made the title a Rhetorical Question as it will lure in the reader as they will think to themselves and ask themselves the question proposed. Using a Rhetorical Question as the title for a news article is a good idea because it sparks intrigue in the reader, as they want to find out if Deyes High is Overcrowded.



In the Article I structured the article in a specific way, firstly I split up all of the information I had into 4 categories,
·                    UK General
·                    Deyes Comparison
·                   Affected Learning
·         Conclusion
I chose to structure the article this way as it would fit in all of the primary sources and secondary sources well.



I chose to add in the numerical information at the start of the article as personally if I were reading the article I would not want to be reading numbers throughout the entire article, therefore I placed them in bulk at the start and put the interview later, as an incentive to get through the numbers and onto the real part of the article.



I made sure that I breadcrumb quoted Mr Ellis in the article, this is so that the reader doesn’t get a transcript of the article instead being told the information when it is necessary. As I am essentially the Gatekeeper for the information I have tried to give as much information as I can without being too overbearing on the subject giving the reader what they need to understand the subject.



I finished off by explaining what I believed to be the reason for the thoughts about the school being crowded in the younger years, I suggest that the school has only accepted a few more children than usual, however the years feel bigger than the year 11, 12 and 13’s because of the fact these years were smaller than usual, which I attributed to the small baby boom in 2004/5 which has continued in the northwest

Sunday, 1 April 2018

D2 - Compare and Contrast the Regulatory Implications for the Article Relevant to the Medium in which it is Transmitted


D2 - Compare and contrast the regulatory implications for the article relevant to the medium in which it is transmitted       

Regulatory Implications

One of the regulatory implications that is extremely important is making sure that the accuracy and standards of the reporting are acceptable. By acceptable I mean that there is no libel, slander or false information. This is important when trying to publish an article without implications as factual reporting means that the implications are minimized as the article is factual and just.

Reporters are expected to be as accurate as possible given the time allocated to prepare a story and find reliable sources. This means that if an event or subject happens there needs to be enough time left for a reporter to create a story that is not guessing or incorrect. Time needs to be allocated for the sources and information to be found reliable. This does not apply to my article as there was no time frame for me to finish the article, as the number of children in the school would not rise until the next year.

Independent fact-checking by another employee of the publisher is desirable. This suggest that if I was in a team writing an article that someone else would also have to fact check the article, checking the sources for reliability as well as making sure that the article is accurate and factual.  Could have followed this rule as it would allow for me to have a more accurate article if one of the sources that I have used is not actually reliable.

One of the most important things when writing an article is that corrections are published when errors are discovered. This means that if I was to report ion something wrong I would have to amend it take the original down and release the new article with the correct information, with the statement down below saying that this has been amended. This is important as it is key when writing news articles that the information has to be factual and correct, leaving incorrect information on the internet or even worse having it published is a serious problem as it could be libel.

when writing an article it is important hat opinion surveys and statistical information deserve special treatment to communicate any conclusions, to contextualise the results, and to specify accuracy, as well as making sure that when the article is written that estimated error is written about. This has applied for my article because I have used an old estimate of the number of school children in the northwest, I suggest that it has probably increased since the census was competed, meaning that there is more children in the UK attending schools.

Ethical and Moral Implications in Journalism

Ethical

It would be unethical of me to start to apply blame to a certain person or people group for creating a rise in the school numbers in the UK, as there is no true cause for the reason. I have strayed away from talking about politics or reasons for cuts in the UK school system as a way to make sure that the article is local to Deyes High and nowhere else.

Moral

Some moral implications are things such as moral panic. Moral panic is when an inflammatory article is published that sparks anger or worries from the public that read it. For example, during the Ebola crisis in west Africa during 2014. The American media went crazy with stories about the virus and how a woman who had been to west Africa who had come back to the US was infected. This created panic in the US as the media went crazy creating stories and interviewing CDC members. The panic created by the media in the US caused several to wear gasmasks and hazmat suits around the Texas area where the woman had visited.

I have made sure that in may article I have not used an inflammatory language or sensationalist language to create moral panic. For example, I could have spun the article suggesting that the schools in the north west are filled to the brim with children and that the system is extremely close to failure. Instead I chose to write the article stating the facts and some of the problems with larger school sizes.